personal statement cliches

Do your CaRMS / ERAS personal statements include these cliches? Minimize or eliminate the following overused phrases:

• Medicine is my calling.

• Ever since I was a child…

• A dream come true.

• My patients’ smiling faces keep me going.

• I want to make a difference.

• I want to help people.

• I want to give back to the community.

• Medicine combines my love of science and people.

• I am passionate about medicine.

• I want to serve humanity.

• From the cradle to the grave.

• From womb to tomb.

• Treat the patient, not just the disease.

• I want to leave a lasting impact.

• I believe in holistic care.

• The human body fascinates me.

• Every patient teaches me something new.

• Medicine is both an art and a science.

• Medicine is not just a job, it’s a way of life.

• I strive to be a lifelong learner.

• I embrace challenges as opportunities.

• It is an honor to be part of someone’s healthcare journey.

• I was inspired by a family member’s illness.

• My rotations confirmed my passion.

• I enjoy working both independently and as part of a team.

• I thrive in a collaborative environment.

• I am committed to continuous improvement.

• I want to contribute to research, teaching, and clinical work.

• I believe in equity and compassion in healthcare.

• I want to bring comfort to patients in their most vulnerable moments.

• I am dedicated to patient-centered care.

• I want to be the doctor I always wished my family had.

• I want to give back to the country that welcomed me.

• I love the challenge of complex cases.

• My journey has been shaped by perseverance and dedication.